It’s true that I don’t understand how people can think Mako is abusive to Korra, which seems to be what the story is about. But, I do understand that the story is shit (from my point of view).
Well, interpretations of a characters actions will always be subjective. Just because an author intends for a character’s actions to be viewed in a particular way doesn’t necessarily mean every reader will see it the way the author meant for them to.
Regarding the luggage, that was one of my least serious complaints about the story. And, I’m aware that it’s indeed very possible to use every form of bending but fire to help move the luggage around. I was poking fun that you didn’t explain what kind of bending she was using to do it though. Merely saying she was using the Avatar State to do it left it vague enough for my imagination to assume that the Avatar State granted Korra supreme luggage-bending powers.
And just because a reader interprets it a certain way doesn’t mean they’re correct, especially when they come in with an obvious bias and an extremely unclear reading of the fic.
That’s your excuse? You “poked fun” at me not mentioning WHAT bending she used? Even though it was obvious to you how she would have to do it?
That’s what you’re going with?
You’re not capable of giving unbiased, logical, sensible critique, so unfortunately I won’t be bothering with your thinly veiled attempts to make up problems that don’t exist because you don’t want your precious Mako to be abusive in a made-up fanfic that you can ignore if you choose.
Some things you could’ve addressed? The jumpiness of the first three chapters, or the plotholes, or the lack of action tags, or the use of some very odd terms in the earlier fics, or certain inconsistencies, or the fast speed of the later chapters…something legitimate.
This is the last time I’ll respond to you. Have a good day.
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